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๐Ÿ“ข๐Ÿ“ข ์ฒดํ—˜์ˆ˜์—… ์˜ˆ์•ฝ์„ ์›ํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ๋ฏธ์Šค์กฐ์ด์—๊ฒŒ ๋ฏธ๋ฆฌ ์ˆ˜์—…์ผ์ •์„ ํ™•์ธํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”! ๐Ÿ‘‘๋ฏธ์Šค ์กฐ์ด ์†Œ๊ฐœ๐Ÿ‘‘ ๐ŸŒŸํ˜„์žฌ ์œ ๋กœ์— ๊ฑฐ์ฃผํ•˜๋ฉฐ ์ค‘ํ•™๊ต๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๋Œ€ํ•™๊นŒ์ง€ ํ˜ธ์ฃผ์—์„œ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๋ฉฐ ์˜์–ด์™€ ์œ ๋Ÿฝ์–ด์— ๋งค๋ฃŒ ๐ŸŒŸํ˜ผ์ž ์—ฌํ–‰ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ข‹์•„ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‚ฌ์ง„ ์ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ข‹์•„ํ•˜๋ฉฐ ํ˜„์ง€ ๋ฌธํ™”์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊นŠ์€ ์ดํ•ด๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๐ŸŒŸํ•ด์™ธ ์˜์–ด ๊ต์œก ๊ฒฝํ—˜: ํ˜ธ์ฃผ๐Ÿ‡ฆ๐Ÿ‡บ์ŠคํŽ˜์ธ๐Ÿ‡ช๐Ÿ‡ธํ—๊ฐ€๋ฆฌ๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡บํด๋ž€๋“œ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ฑ์ฒด์ฝ”๐Ÿ‡จ๐Ÿ‡ฟ ************************************************** ************************** โœจ๐ŸŒŸMiss Zoe์˜ ์ปค๋ฆฌํ˜๋Ÿผ๐ŸŒŸโœจ ๐Ÿ‘‘ ์•„์ด์—˜์ธ  ๐Ÿ’ฏ๋“ฃ๊ธฐ ๐Ÿ’ฏ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๐Ÿ’ฏ์ฝ๊ธฐ ๐Ÿ’ฏ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ๐Ÿ‘‘ ์˜์–ด ๋“ฃ๊ธฐ ๋ฐ ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ํ›ˆ๋ จ ๐Ÿ’ฏ๋Œ€ํ™” ์˜์–ด ๐Ÿ‘‘์˜์–ด ์ฝ๊ธฐ ๋ฐ ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๊ต์œก ๐Ÿ’ฏP1-P6 ๐Ÿ’ฏTSA ๐Ÿ’ฏS1-S6 ๐Ÿ’ฏDSE ๐Ÿ’ฏ๊ฐœ์ธ ์ง„์ˆ ์„œ ๐Ÿ’ฏ๊ณผ์ œ ์—์„ธ์ด ๐Ÿ‘‘์˜์–ด ๊ต์œก ๐Ÿ’ฏ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๐Ÿ‘‘ ์ฐฝ์ž‘ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๐Ÿ’ฏ์‹œ ๐Ÿ’ฏ์—ฐ๊ทน ๐Ÿ’ฏ์˜ํ™” ๋ฐ ํ…”๋ ˆ๋น„์ „ ๋Œ€๋ณธ ๐Ÿ’ฏํ”ฝ์…˜(์†Œ์„ค, ์ค‘ํŽธ ์†Œ์„ค ๋ฐ ๋‹จํŽธ ์†Œ์„ค) ๐Ÿ’ฏ๋…ธ๋ž˜ ๐Ÿ’ฏ์—ฐ์„ค ๐Ÿ’ฏํšŒ๊ณ ๋ก ๐Ÿ’ฏ๊ฐœ์ธ ์—์„ธ์ด ๐Ÿ‘‘์บ ๋ธŒ๋ฆฌ์ง€ ์˜์–ด ๐Ÿ’ฏPre A1 ๐Ÿ’ฏA1 ๐Ÿ’ฏA2 ๐Ÿ’ฏB1 ๐Ÿ’ฏB2 ๐Ÿ‘‘ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ ์˜์–ด ์Œ์„ฑํ•™(Letterland) ๐Ÿ’ฏA-Z ์ž์Œ ๐Ÿ’ฏ๋‹จ๋ชจ์Œ ๋Œ€ ์žฅ๋ชจ์Œ ๐Ÿ‘‘๊ณ ๊ธ‰ ์˜์–ด ์Œ์„ฑํ•™ ๐Ÿ’ฏDigraphs ๐Ÿ’ฏdiphthongs ๐Ÿ’ฏ๋Œ€์ถœ ๐Ÿ‘‘์˜์–ด ์Œ์„ฑํ•™ ๋ฐ ์Œ์šด๋ก  ๐Ÿ’ฏAdvance blending ๐Ÿ’ฏR ์ œ์–ด ๋ชจ์Œ ๐Ÿ’ฏ์‹œ์–ด, ํ•ฉ์„ฑ์–ด, ์ ‘๋‘์‚ฌ, ์ ‘๋ฏธ์‚ฌ ๐Ÿ‘‘ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ ์˜์–ด ๊ตญ์ œ ์Œ์„ฑ ์•ŒํŒŒ๋ฒณ ๐Ÿ’ฏIPA ๐Ÿ‘‘๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์˜์–ด ๐Ÿ’ฏ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ๐Ÿ’ฏ๊ณต์‹/๋น„๊ณต์‹ ํŽธ์ง€ ๐Ÿ’ฏ๊ตฌ๋‘ ์˜์–ด โšก์ฝ”์Šค ํŠน์ง•โšก ๐Ÿ’ฅ ๋ฐ›์•„์“ฐ๊ธฐ, ์ฝ๊ธฐ ๋ฐ ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ข…ํ•ฉ ๊ต์œก ๐Ÿ’ฅ์ž์ฒด ๊ทธ๋ฃน ์ˆ˜์—…: 40% ํ• ์ธ ๐Ÿ’ฅ์˜์–ด์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ด€์‹ฌ์„ ํ‚ค์šฐ๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ํ•„์š”์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ํ…Œ๋งˆ๋ฅผ ์กฐ์ •ํ•˜์„ธ์š” ๐Ÿ’ฅํ•™์ƒ์˜ ์˜์–ด ์ˆ˜์ค€์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ์ฝ”์Šค ์ฝ˜ํ…์ธ  ๊ฐœ๋ฐœ/๋ณ€๊ฒฝ ๐Ÿ’ฅ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์—ฐ๋ น๋Œ€์˜ ๊ด€์‹ฌ ์š”๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ์ถฉ์กฑํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•œ ์„ ํƒ์  ๊ธธ์ด(25๋ถ„/50๋ถ„)
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    ๊ฒฝ๋ ฅ

    • 2021 - 2021 Modern Continuing Education Centre (Hong Kong) - Lecturer / English In Charge
    • 2017 - 2021 Yan Oi Tong (Hong Kong) - English Teacher
    • 2015 - 2017 Glory Nursery (Hong Kong) - English Teacher
    • 2017 - 2017 EIP Pequenos Artistas (Spain)- English Teacher
    • 2019 - 2022 Angloville (Poland) - English Language Mentor
    • 2019 - 2019 Angloville (Hungary) - English Language Mentor
    • 2019 - 2022 JustSpeak (Poland) - English Language Mentor

    ํ•™๋ ฅ

    • 2007 - 2010 RMIT University Bachelor of Business (Accountancy),ย Accountancy

    • 2016 - 2018 The Education University of Hong Kong Postgraduate Diploma in Education (Early Childhood Education),ย Early Childhood Education and Teaching

    • 2012 - 2014 The Education University of Hong Kong Master of Arts in Teaching English to Speakers of Other Languages,ย Teaching English as a Second or Foreign Language/ESL Language Instructor

    • 2005 - 2006 Box Hill Institute Certificate IV in Hospitality,ย Hospitality and Recreation Marketing Operations

    • 2015 - 2015 HKMA Certificate in Public Relations,ย Public Relations, Advertising, and Applied Communication

    • 2019 - 2019 Premier TEFL Advance TEFL

    ์ž๊ฒฉ์ฆ๊ณผ ์ฆ๋ช…์„œ

    • Advanced Teaching English as a Foreign Language Course

    • The Australian Children's Education & Care Quality Authority

    • Montessori Teacher Training

    • Chartered Linguist (English & Cantonese, Education)

    ๊ฒฝ๋ ฅ
    • 2021 - 2021 Modern Continuing Education Centre (Hong Kong) - Lecturer / English In Charge
    • 2017 - 2021 Yan Oi Tong (Hong Kong) - English Teacher
    • 2015 - 2017 Glory Nursery (Hong Kong) - English Teacher
    • 2017 - 2017 EIP Pequenos Artistas (Spain)- English Teacher
    • 2019 - 2022 Angloville (Poland) - English Language Mentor
    • 2019 - 2019 Angloville (Hungary) - English Language Mentor
    • 2019 - 2022 JustSpeak (Poland) - English Language Mentor
    ํ•™๋ ฅ
    • 2007 - 2010

      RMIT University

      Bachelor of Business (Accountancy),ย Accountancy

    • 2016 - 2018

      The Education University of Hong Kong

      Postgraduate Diploma in Education (Early Childhood Education),ย Early Childhood Education and Teaching

    • 2012 - 2014

      The Education University of Hong Kong

      Master of Arts in Teaching English to Speakers of Other Languages,ย Teaching English as a Second or Foreign Language/ESL Language Instructor

    • 2005 - 2006

      Box Hill Institute

      Certificate IV in Hospitality,ย Hospitality and Recreation Marketing Operations

    • 2015 - 2015

      HKMA

      Certificate in Public Relations,ย Public Relations, Advertising, and Applied Communication

    • 2019 - 2019

      Premier TEFL

      Advance TEFL

    ์ž๊ฒฉ์ฆ๊ณผ ์ฆ๋ช…์„œ
    • Advanced Teaching English as a Foreign Language Course

    • The Australian Children's Education & Care Quality Authority

    • Montessori Teacher Training

    • Chartered Linguist (English & Cantonese, Education)

    ์ž์ฃผ ๋ฌป๋Š” ์งˆ๋ฌธ

    ์˜ˆ์•ฝ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•

    • ๊ฐ•์˜ ๊ตฌ๋งค ํ›„ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜์˜ ๊ฐ•์˜ ์Šค์ผ€์ค„์— ํ‘œ์‹œ๋œ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์— ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ์‹ ์ฒญํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
    • ใ€Ž๋ฐ”๋กœ ์ˆ˜์—… ๊ฐ€๋Šฅใ€์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ‘œ์‹œ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด, ์ฆ‰์‹œ ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ์˜ˆ์•ฝํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”.
    • ๊ทธ๋ ‡์ง€ ์•Š๋‹ค๋ฉด 24์‹œ๊ฐ„ ์ดํ›„์˜ ์ˆ˜์—…๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์˜ˆ์•ฝํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”.

    ๋น„์šฉ์„ค๋ช…

    • ๋ง›๋ณด๊ธฐ ์ˆ˜์—… ์‹œ๊ฐ„์€ ์•ฝ 25๋ถ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
    • ์ •๊ทœ ์ˆ˜์—… ์‹œ๊ฐ„์€ 25๋ถ„ ํ˜น์€ 50๋ถ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
    • ์ •๊ทœ ์ˆ˜์—… 5ํšŒ ์ด์ƒ ๊ตฌ๋งค ์‹œ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ ํ• ์ธ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. (์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜์˜ ์ˆ˜๊ฐ•๋ฃŒ์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ์ƒ์ด)

    ์ˆ˜๊ฐ•๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•

    • ์ˆ˜์—… 10๋ถ„ ์ „ ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€, ใ€Ž๋‚˜์˜ ๊ฐ•์˜์‹คใ€๋‚ด์—์„œ ์ˆ˜๊ฐ•ํ•  ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ์ฐพ์€ ๋’ค ใ€Ž๊ต์‹ค ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€๊ธฐใ€๋ฅผ ์„ ํƒํ•˜๋ฉด ZOOM์ด ์‹œ์ž‘๋˜๊ณ  ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
    • ํœด๋Œ€ํฐ, PC ๋ชจ๋‘ ZOOM์„ ์ด์šฉํ•ด ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ๋“ค์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. (ํœด๋Œ€ํฐ์— ๋ฏธ๋ฆฌ ZOOM ์–ดํ”Œ๋ฆฌ์ผ€์ด์…˜์„ ์„ค์น˜ํ•ด ์ฃผ์„ธ์š”)

    ํ™˜๋ถˆ ์ฐธ๊ณ  ์‚ฌํ•ญ

    • ์ˆ˜์—… ์ค‘ ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•˜๋ฉด ใ€Ž๋ฌธ์ œ์‹ ๊ณ ใ€๋ฅผ ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜์ด ๋‹ค์‹œ ์˜ˆ์•ฝ์„ ํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ AT์ฝ”์ธ์œผ๋กœ ํ™˜๋ถˆํ•ด๋“œ๋ ค์š”.
    • ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜์ด 12์‹œ๊ฐ„ ๋‚ด์— ๋‹ต์žฅ์„ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ, ์‹œ์Šคํ…œ์—์„œ ๋‹น์‹ ์—๊ฒŒ ์ž๋™์œผ๋กœ AT์ฝ”์ธ์„ ํ™˜๋ถˆํ•ด๋“œ๋ ค์š”.
    ์˜ˆ์•ฝ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•
    • ๊ฐ•์˜ ๊ตฌ๋งค ํ›„ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜์˜ ๊ฐ•์˜ ์Šค์ผ€์ค„์— ํ‘œ์‹œ๋œ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์— ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ์‹ ์ฒญํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
    • ใ€Ž๋ฐ”๋กœ ์ˆ˜์—… ๊ฐ€๋Šฅใ€์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ‘œ์‹œ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด, ์ฆ‰์‹œ ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ์˜ˆ์•ฝํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”.
    • ๊ทธ๋ ‡์ง€ ์•Š๋‹ค๋ฉด 24์‹œ๊ฐ„ ์ดํ›„์˜ ์ˆ˜์—…๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์˜ˆ์•ฝํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”.
    ๋น„์šฉ์„ค๋ช…
    • ๋ง›๋ณด๊ธฐ ์ˆ˜์—… ์‹œ๊ฐ„์€ ์•ฝ 25๋ถ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
    • ์ •๊ทœ ์ˆ˜์—… ์‹œ๊ฐ„์€ 25๋ถ„ ํ˜น์€ 50๋ถ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
    • ์ •๊ทœ ์ˆ˜์—… 5ํšŒ ์ด์ƒ ๊ตฌ๋งค ์‹œ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ ํ• ์ธ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. (์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜์˜ ์ˆ˜๊ฐ•๋ฃŒ์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ์ƒ์ด)
    ์ˆ˜๊ฐ•๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•
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